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A Ninja's Saga 01

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A Ninja's Saga part 1
"The village under attack"

Gentenku, a village where people and creatures of different abilities lived together in unison amidst of their obvious difference, in this village lived a young ninja named Aiko. Her parents dreamed for her to the greatest ninja in history and the next Kage to lead their village. They sent her to the most prestigious ninja school and she proves to have a lot of potential. Her friends and school mates loves her for her talent and her generally happy personality. And the whole village thinks that she is someone to count on in times of need.

She have lots of good allies, one of them is a fairy named Mana. They train a lot together and talk about silly things. And even if they have missions that would take them so far away from each other in long periods of time, they would always find away to communicate, cause of one of Mana's skills telekinesis. She could send messages to anyone with just her thoughts and also read anybody's mind that she as pleases.

While Mana was far away, Aiko was training for her the upcoming Level 3 Ninja examination. She was training with one of the best teachers around, a former special operations ninja named Satoshi. "Sir Satoshi, you're late again" Aiko shouted as her teacher arrives. "Sorry I got lost in the path of life" her teacher lazily replied. "You always say that!" Aiko answered back. Satoshi just smiled and said "ok let's start your training" Satoshi assumed his fighting pose "Yosh!!" and assumed her pose as well.

But before Aiko could land any punches, Mana suddenly entered Aiko's mind. "Aiko-chan!!" Aiko stopped and caught Satoshi's taijutsu and sent her flying across the field. Sitting up from where she landed Aiko annoyingly thought "What is it?! I'm kind of training here" knowing Mana could read her thoughts. "Oh.. sorry, well this is urgent!," Mana apologized and continued "I had a premonition that our Kage is going to get kidnapped today."  "What?!" Satoshi noticed his student just sitting there with a confused look on her face, he approaches "What's wrong Aiko? Remember you're in training. You have to concentrate."

Aiko then told her teacher what Mana has told her. Just then alarm in the village sounded. Upon hearing the sound, teacher and student rushed to the village and saw the attack taking place. They fought enemy ninjas they find. "Aiko", Satoshi called her attention "go on ahead to Kage's headquarters and alarm her bodyguard of what you know!" "Yes sir!"

Aiko rushed to the headquarters but before getting there an odd looking man, stopped her on her tracks. "My name is Lakuma, and my master told me stop anyone who'll try to ruin her plans. I'm not gonna let you ruin my master's plan!" "Well I don't care about your name and your master, just get the hell out of my way!" Aiko exclaimed and used one of her most powerful ninjutsu. A wind based elemental attack that sends her enemies flying using heavy gust of wind. But it didn't work, it was like Lakuma is attached to the ground. Lakuma laughed "Is that it little girl?" then he casted a spell on her.

"What was that?" Aiko asked cause she didn't feel a thing and continued to fight. She did everything she could but her enemy just doesn't give up. The battle lasted for hours then suddenly "Aiko-chan!!!" It was Shei that was calling her then Aiko's vision just filled with bright light, blinding her vision.

"Ah! Finally she's waking up!" Mana announced.  "Aiko, are you alright?" another girl's voice said.  She opened her eyes and saw Mana just fluttering around in her face. "Ah Mana", Aiko started "your way too close, a breather please?" "Opps sorry…" Mana flew away but still close, only enough to give Aiko a chance to sit up. Mitsuko, another ninja was in the room, "Are you alright?" she repeated. "Yeah, where's that weird guy? What happened to him?" Aiko asked. "Sir Satoshi took care of him", Mitsuko started to explain "We found you unconscious and about to be crushed by that guy on our way to Hokage".  "What?" Aiko said confused.  "It seemed that your enemy put some kind of illusion spell on you, to make you think you think your still fighting but in reality you're unconscious." Mana explained.  "How long have I been out?" Aiko asked.  "About an hour from the time we found you" Mitsuko answered.  "That illusion spell is weird, it took me a while to break it" Mana explained it.  "An illusion spell that puts you to sleep and makes you think you're still fighting, that's impossible!!" Aiko said.  "Actually that kind of illusion technique existed. It's an ancient illusion spell that was forbidden hundreds of years ago. Acquiring it requires a lot of forbidden procedures and records of it are all destroyed." Mitsuko explained.  "But if all records of it are destroyed, then how could that Lakuma have it?" Aiko wondered.

"Maouk…" Satoshi said as he entered the room.  "Maouk? but she's dead." Mana said.  "Because of the recent attack on our village, our intel have concluded that there's a possibility she's still alive. Most of the attackers have powerful skills that only she have studied and perfected." Satoshi explained.   "What could she want from the Kage?" Mana asked.  "Information" Satoshi answered "All of our village secret is known by our Kage".  "What kind of information could she possibly want? More Jutsu?" Mitsuko wondered.  "Possibly…" Aiko answered then asked "Where is the Kage? Is she alright?".  "She's perfectly safe, thanks to Mana's premonition" Satoshi answered.  "Ah! It's nothing!" Mana smiled.

Things have somehow gone back to normal but the whole village is still on high alert. Aiko is ordered to stay in the infirmary for further observation. Mitsuko and Mana kept her company until the nurse told them to go home and let Aiko sleep.

The next day right after being allowed to go home, Aiko is called to go to the headquarters. Kage was waiting for her. Aiko stood patiently in her office as the Kage fights with her assistant about breakfast and paper work. "Finally", the Kage started "Aiko I'm sorry to keep you waiting but Yori is too much!" "Hey I'm still here you know! And Naoko you're Kage now, you should change your ways!" Yori scolded Naoko, the new female Kage. "Whatever!" Naoko annoyingly said "Anyway, I have a mission for you Aiko" Aiko listened intently. "Go to Mikaneko Village, and pick her up!" "Wh-what? Do you mean her?" Aiko worriedly repeated.  "Yes! Her! Go pick her up, I need her here right away."  "But"  "No buts, just do it!" Naoko ordered. "You know you should pick her up on your own." Yori suggested.  "And what about my paper works? Huh?" Naoko tauntingly answered.

As the two friends, Kage and assistant, verbally fought, Aiko walked out of the room, worried about her next mission. Just the thought of picking her up scares her.

TO BE CONTINUED…
I was totally pissed when I wrote this, to be honest. I was trolled and I can’t do anything about it, though I can find that person personally (cause she’s a n00b and left bread crumbs) but I choose not to and started writing this story instead. I thought, why waste my time with a person like that? Anyway one of my friends gave me that grand idea to write a better story than blog about that BS.

The original version of this is posted on my facebook account. I didn’t change that much, only the names of the characters (I used my friends’ names since they’re the ones who helped me during this whole trolling BS), the Naruto references (you can still read some lines from the anime in this re-written version, cause I still think it’s funny. Anyway I love Naruto!!) and the corny intro to this part of the story. Yeah I know I should be describing the scenes more but I didn’t… being lazy I know…

And about the title, well I’m not blessed with that talent. The talent of making titles!! Bwahahaha~! The title is based on one of Facebook application called Ninja Saga. I’m hooked on that game, if you also play that add me here.

Note: Most of the Japanese here are made up and has a special meaning to me. So if you think it’s odd it’s because it’s made up Japanese. Peace!

Thanks for reading!!

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